Post your thesis statement to your blog, and then take a look at your fellow classmates's thesis statements: offer them some constructive criticism.
Here's one more photograph, from Tehachapi. Since I haven't titled any previous photographs, I'll give this one a name: "Ghost Train."
cool pic
ReplyDeleteDid you take that in town or on the Loop? I took my son up to the Loop once. We sat there and watched trains, and talked to the older railfans about schedules and things.
ReplyDeleteIt was in town. The loop is pretty cool also. It would be fun to hop on one of the trains going up.
DeleteI had to shoot a short documentary film for Prof. Slaughter last quarter, and I really wanted to "Shoot The Loop" and film from a train. I make things harder on myself than I need to, anyway, so I went for something more simple.
DeleteDr. Woodman, I revised my thesis and responded to your comment on my blog, but I don't know if it will notify you. Just in case you are still looking at the blogs. :) Thanks for your input!
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ReplyDeleteI am curious as to what an acceptable % Similarity would be on TurnItIn is... It said my essay had 17% similar, but all it matched was the works cited, my quotations, and my thesis from my blog.
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ReplyDeleteFor my rough draft essay on turnitin.com , it is said that similarity 19% but it was quotes and cited work.Iam curious about final submission of my essay 1...........veena kumari